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140583 No. 140583 ID: 995874

A discussion thread for Rotten Apple quest.

https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1067335.html
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No. 141604 ID: dc13c4
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141604

Absurdity DeVoid: "Just doing a fanart of Magical School Of Treachery. Now Derklord can you see this as bribery? Sure you can see it that way. But I like to see it more as me appreciating your cameo."
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No. 141605 ID: dc13c4

>>141604


Absurdity DeVoid: "Also have to apologize if this art of these characters isn't biblically accurate."
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No. 141623 ID: dc13c4
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141623

Bobbie: "Congratulations on finishing the first part of Rotten Apple Monster Queen Quest! It took some time but it was completed, maybe the quest will continue after a short break."

Abdle: "Yeah we earn it after so many days of updates, but before we finish our celebration we need to read the message that Absurdity has given to us."
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No. 141624 ID: dc13c4
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141624

Bobbie: "As a prize for following the quest and participating in it all you can submit your ideas for the characters, and give a short or long summary of it. Or a drawing, I will draw it in my art style and implement it in the story. Have fun and be creative if you want to make a character for the quest."
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No. 141625 ID: 27fceb

My idea for the character would be a human executor who first was part of the Head Splitters and later joined the Banisters. When he abandoned the second faction he ended up in the forgotten kingdom just chopping wood not loyal no one. So my idea is for him to become another ally to the Monster Queen.
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No. 141627 ID: dc13c4
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141627

Interesting idea, as for how this character would look is it alright with you if I reuse one of my ideas for an abandoned quest story that I never did? For the look, it would be the stereotypical medieval executor look. So what do you think, does this fit your idea for that character?
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No. 141630 ID: 5ebd37
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141630

A kenku scholar on the trail of a conspiracy/prophecy. It started as just an excuse to go on a trip, but now they're horribly worried its actually true.
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No. 141632 ID: dc13c4
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141632

I really like this character and I already have an idea where I can use him. Here is how looks in my art style without and with colors. So what is your opinion on it? As for the executor, what would be his name?
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No. 141633 ID: b7022b

Generous offer but will have to politely decline a fleshed out being. Orbital was a surprise. Even though it was bad, quite like being surprised. Plot twists are so much sweeter if you have a few pieces of the puzzle but not enough to see the whole picture. Perhaps a concept would suffice though. Vague enough to still be unsure. Was worried about a secret test of character before. Just having the possibility will constantly challenge. How do we know if we're tested or if we waste resources on a red herring? Perhaps not having one would be the twist itself. With that level of ambiguity it will still be tough without spoiling what may yet be.
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No. 141634 ID: 27fceb

I completely forgot to give my character a name. Well let's go with his profession being his name. It isn't that he doesn't have a name but rather that he doesn't care about it. As for his appearance yeah that will do, that will do, also one running joke with him is that his face never gets revealed.
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No. 141635 ID: 5ebd37

They look great, blue suits them
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No. 141636 ID: dc13c4
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141636

Absurdity DeVoid: "First of all I understand if you Grand Marshal are not interested in creating character, those who will we meet later on. This whole thing is primarily a reference to the quest that I followed where the quest author asked me to create characters for his quest at the star of it. On the topic of red herring, well if this is about the battles, every opponent will have a different way how they demonstrate strength and the job of the queen will be to dismantle that. Maybe some will use red herrings in their strategy or we will do that against them. As for our executioner, his official name will be Executioner I just want to remind you that you have chosen this. And finally Nalthar, I am glad that you like how I colored your character."
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No. 141637 ID: c77d55

Slight misunderstanding. Whole red herring thing was for secret tests of character so we would never be sure if we face an actual one. Still, good to know. Will expect the unexpected.
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No. 141642 ID: dc13c4
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141642

I apologize for not understanding what you asked me. But at the same time, I gave you something else to think about.
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No. 141643 ID: dc13c4
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141643

As for your real question, well there won't be as much as secret skill checks as there were in the Long live the Queen game. But at the same time, there are going to be some things that your opponents will expect from you and will be able to counter your attempts.
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No. 141659 ID: e51896
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141659

Okay, my idea for a character.

A mysterious pig vampire showed up to this world, looking to set up a fast food restaurant chain called "BURGERVANIA" within the different kingdoms of the world. Apparently, the BURGERVANIA chain did not originate from this world, but from another world entirely, and they want to expand their burger empire throughout the different universes out there after making some kind of deal with a demon from another world to help them do it, and BURGERVANIA chose the world of rotten apple as one of the many worlds to expand their business.

This pig is name Vance, and while he isn't the true owner of BURGERVANIA, he was sent here by the head CEO to spread the business to this world, and act as this world's BURGERVANIA's CEO

He is neutral and will not pick sides, as he is willing to not only expand to Bobbie's kingdom, but to the other kingdoms, including her enemies' kingdoms. Perhaps he will try to work out a deal with Bobbie to allow him to purchase some places to set up some BURGERVANIA restaurants in her kingdom and villages.

Since he's a vampire, he can only be around during the night.

No, he does not personally know w2K and they are not related. They have never met before. He only knows her as a mascot, which they will probably use her image to try to help sell their food.
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No. 141696 ID: c65153
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141696

So since there was a parody of my characters in the quest and they described it as an anime in the story I decided to create the anime cover art of the parody.
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No. 141709 ID: 55f601
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141709

First of all, I want to thank everyone for sending their ideas for characters, it was fun thinking about how to implement them all in the story. Now about Vance, he is a clear connection to the other quest and I don't have a problem with that. But what I want to change a little bit is how he ended up in this world, instead of coming here it will be that he is stranded in this world and needs to create his food chain from scratch. I imagine him to act like Ray Kroc from the Founder movie.
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No. 141770 ID: e7a0ae
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141770

So worst or best typo?
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No. 141785 ID: 72574f
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141785

Absurdity DeVoid: "Oh how embarrassing for me to make such a silly mistake, yeah it was supposed to be sit instead of shit."
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No. 141786 ID: 72574f
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141786

Absurdity DeVoid: "But at the same time I find it really funny. Also, I have been thinking of making a comic of Rotten Apple characters singing songs how do you all feel about that idea."
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No. 141790 ID: 9c23e7

Won't lie, see lots of typos but usually it's easy to know what it's supposed to be. Had to highlight that one for the humor value, though. Did consider leaving in Wormworks saying it's fine and naming the png "Wormworks_has_a_fetish.png" but it seemed funny enough as is since he's smiling. Per the comic do it if it's fun for you chief. We are but humble readers/suggestors. Ours is to positively criticize. We'd be very entitled if we tell you how to do fun things.
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No. 141813 ID: e002ad
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141813

Absurdity DeVoid: "What I can say for my defense is that I usually want to make the update as soon as possible, I work alone but things slip by me."
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No. 141814 ID: e002ad
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141814

Absurdity DeVoid: "Despite all my grammatical mistakes and unimpressive art I am glad that the story captivated you."
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No. 141815 ID: 52a42d

Didn't mean to make ya feel bad. Just happen to notice typos in daily life. Were it a deal-breaker would probably never read words at all. Oh and while digital coloring and perhaps shading is not that tough, line art is my kryptonite. So however unimpressive you believe your art is, you're still better than like 80% of people who have no art skill at all. Plus most artists improve the more they draw. Especially if they criticize their own works. So chin up as they say in British derived dialects!
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No. 141818 ID: 0f6712

>>141815
It is alright, do you have a discord? We can talk there.
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No. 141826 ID: bcde53

>>141818
Short version: no. Long version: technological affinity has made me a technophobe because of privacy concerns. Little ironic eh? Still, while a level of tracking is very hard to avoid in this day and age, giving up and letting it be easy just seems foolish.

However if retro works, just joined IRC at #tgchan on irc.rizon.net even if it's semi-dead.
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No. 141828 ID: 711344

I completely understand your approach to interacting with technology, in today's day and age anything that you say or do on the internet it will be recorded and monitored. I will respect your decision and not ask you anymore about Discord.
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No. 141966 ID: fbe348
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141966

Bobbie: "Well for today's celebration put in all the jokes that you liked or would like to see in this quest."

Abdle: "Are you sure that is going to be such a good idea, you do realize what people on this site find funny."
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No. 141967 ID: fbe348
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Bobbie: "Oh I am fully aware and in a way am accepting of it."
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No. 141972 ID: 27fceb

I like the joke of Bobbie being tired of everybody's nonsense.
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No. 141976 ID: 5ebd37

Abdle's little toy friend is a good joke
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No. 141977 ID: 5ebd37
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141977

a travel poster for the castle
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No. 141989 ID: 7c55ad

I like Bobbie's small silly moments especially when it contrasts with her personality (like that cringey dab she did)
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No. 141994 ID: 9c049c
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141994

Bobbie: "I asked for your favorite joke and now you just created a joke that I really like. you definitely outplayed me during this celebration, I can assure you that this travel poster will become a part of the quest."
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No. 141995 ID: 9c049c
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141995

Bobbie: "As for your other suggestion all of them will be taken into consideration and it will be sprinkled them here and there in the quest. Not trying to overdo it."
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No. 141996 ID: 9c049c
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141996

Bobbie: "And yes this also includes Abdle's little toy friend joke as well."

Abdle: "Oh joy..."
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No. 142050 ID: 27fceb

So what's up with the heart point that we just got?
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No. 142053 ID: 4c9b0e
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142053

It is a reference to relationships standing with other characters. The more points you have the more they will see you in a favorable light, there will be all sorts of them as the quest goes along. I will give you some for the characters that you already know exist.

1. belongs to the Archer.

2. belongs to Worm Works.

3. belongs to the whole Farm Knights Gang.
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No. 142090 ID: 0a3525
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142090

Just something for later. I was asked to help make a special monster by Absurdity, so this is what I came up with. Don't read if you don't want spoilers.

They are an Oblex, a special type of Ooze that can change its appearance based on the memories of people it's eaten. As such, they are something of a scholar and librarian but everything they do is an imitation of actual feelings. There is always something just slightly off about them, and when they get too stressed out, panicked, etc, they return to their slime form.
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No. 142094 ID: d37872
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142094

Harbard Grim is the one who picked which one of these 5 character is the Oblex and it will be up to you all to figure out who that is.
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No. 142162 ID: c5529d

I think at this moment, the reason why I'm thinking we shouldn't take the gift is because I believe the demon kid when he said that he didn't use any illusions to trick us. So if it isn't him, it's one of the others. And right now, I'm thinking it's probably Scarecrow Kid who tried to mess with us, considering he was likely staring directly at one of the lesser demons, which isn't normal. I might be a bit too paranoid, but right now, I think that gift might actually be something that could mess with us later down the line if we accept it, especially if he was the one who was causing illusions on the demon kid's arms to mess with us earlier.
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No. 142163 ID: c5529d

>>142162
Also posted this here in case Scarecrow Kid can hear us. If he can see us, he can probably hear us too.
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No. 142164 ID: 27fceb

What if not taking his gift may just anger him.
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No. 142165 ID: c5529d

Perhaps. But it's better than just breaking it in front of him as the other other option. Pretty much why in my decision, I made it a polite decline to not hurt his feelings by saying it's too valuable to just accept, and to keep it with him for later. Can't forget that one of them is the Oblex after all >>142094
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No. 142172 ID: 20a211
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142172

Fan Art for the House Cadvere quest which was made by Nalthar

https://questden.org/kusaba/quest/res/1080954.html
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No. 142253 ID: 7c724f
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No. 142363 ID: 5ebd37

I think we can use the cat's cleverness against her

Step one: Bobbie carries decoy toy around in place of the real Abdle, with a good but not perfect disguise. Shadow Taker will see through this deception and know Abdle is hidden somewhere, but she will think that we think we fooled her.
Step two: Abdle is hidden in a chamber that is rigged as a trap. Something where when the thief enters she will get dropped in a pit or a cage falls on her. Better yet, have the hallway leading to the room be trapped, so when she opens the door at one end the other end gets sealed shut. She may be tricky, but I bet she isn't carrying a big drill or bomb able to get through a solid stone dungeon.
Bonus deception: Abdle isn't even in the trap room, but a set of arranged mirror's make it look like he is. Something like one of those boxy periscopes. This way even if ST tries to yoink him with a trick bolt he'll be quite unreachable. or at least give him time to escape hatch if she has something we didn't anticipate.
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No. 142555 ID: e25c20

Thank you for following the quest so far we reached the half-point of the second chapter so it is a good point for a short survey. How do you like the story so far, is there something more that you would like to see and if you have to add some constructive criticism I will consider it.
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No. 142558 ID: c5529d

>How do you like the story so far
it's engaging. I like the comedic moments

>is there something more that you would like to see
I'm interested in seeing how the characters develop in the story

>if you have to add some constructive criticism I will consider it.
There's spelling errors from time to time, but I think it still gets the message across regardless. If you want, you can probably write out the script in a word document for it to correct any errors before writing it in the picture if that helps.
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