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==Current Abilities==
A three-eyed, betentacled eldritch man-eating monster and a fungus-based druid learn the meaning of love and also kill a whole lot of stuff.  Vaguely D&D-related, but does not follow the rules strictly.
 
= Plot =
== Chapter 1 ==
The quest begins by introducing Viktor, an emaciated creature who has been locked in a small room with several coins, gems, and a sword for many years, possibly centuries.  He has gone without food or entertainment this entire time, and has gone so mad with hunger he no longer remembers who or what he is or why he is there.  He is roused from his catatonia by people outside: an elf rogue and a human barbarian, looking for treasure, who unlock his door.  Viktor promptly eats them.  He realizes that he digests organic materials extremely fast, and when he does so, he restores a bit of his mind (he has a vision of a floating city made of coral) and gains new abilities.  He also discovers a vast system of underground caverns inhabited by mole-like humanoids called talpids.
 
Viktor hears a scream and goes to investigate.  He discovers Ivet, a mushroom-like female creature, being attacked by several talpids, with whom she communicates using a language Viktor does not understand.  Viktor promptly devours all the Talpids, but spares Ivet because he does not find her fungus-based body appetizing.  Ivet is initially shocked by Viktor, but warms up to him when he learns he isn't a mindless killer.  She tells him that she came from a society of Fey creatures, which had recently entered hostilities with the talpids after they began following a man espousing gods that allegedly existed before the current pantheon.  She says that she was tagging along with her friend Avara, who she described as an important diplomat charged with something to do with ending the hostilities.  The talpids, she says, collapsed the tunnels connecting her society with theirs, and killed Avara, leaving her to barely escape with her life.  Viktor agrees to help her return to her homeland, but she needs to rest for the journey, because the outside area is a desert and she is out of spells and unprepared to endure it.
 
Viktor leads her (with a new staff from one of the talpids) back to the room he had been sleeping in, where she is shocked to see the immense wealth he had been sleeping with, and identifies the sword (bearing an image of a horned birdlike creature) as cursed, as it hurts both of them when they touch it.  She also identifies the gold coins as belonging to the Ungolan empire, which has not existed for centuries, making the coins worth even more than normal gold.
 
While Ivet sleeps, Viktor goes off to investigate another living creature he heard deeper in the ruins.  He approaches to find a vast hall with a throne in the center bearing a sundered crown, as well as a large bird-like creature called the Ash Crow.
 
The Ash Crow explains that the ruins once belonged to an ancient being known as the Bone Lord, a necromancer of considerable power, whom the Ash crow served, or who served the Ash Crow (it claims not to recall which).  Long ago, according to the Ash Crow, the Bone Lord was struck down by heroes, who "would strike down even the gods with their ignorance."  However, the Ash Crow continues, the right "voice" could make them walk again.
 
The Ash Crow and Viktor then do battle, and Viktor prevails by using his new camouflage ability to deliver a devastating sneak-attack, then finishing it off with a pillar and devouring it.  While eating, he has a vision of a bird-like creature bearing gold-plated warriors through the sky, and the bone lord raising one of the birds as a zombie.
 
Viktor returns to Ivet and sleeps in the room with her.  After they both wake and she prepares her spells for the day, they experiment with his new shapeshifting abilities to create a passable human form for him, which can discreetly carry all the coins and gems, as viktor determines that the bird on the sword matches the one in his vision but seems less like the Ash Crow (lacking a third eye and tentacles).  They then find their way out of the ruin, which comes out atop a mesa in a vast desert.  She identifies her homeland as a giant cloud sitting at ground level in the distance.
 
== Chapter 2 ==
The chapter begins with the readers in control of a deer-like fey named Cerin, who is near the border of the city.  The city is identified as being essentially a massive crater in the desert, covered with plant life and enormous trees.  A pillar of energy in the center rises out of the crater, passes through the palace of the local sovereign, Mother Oasis, and then branches out and turns into a cloud that covers the entire area, protecting it from the sun.
 
Cerin sees Viktor and Ivet entering the city and recognizes Ivet, but he can't recall from where.  He tries to use mind-altering magic on Viktor to convince him to leave so he can seduce Ivet, but it fails to work.  Ivet then uses the same magic to convince Cerin to follow them into a secluded spot in a nearby nymph pond, where Viktor can eat him without attracting attention.
 
Ivet and Viktor decide to unwind from their harrowing ordeals by going to a local party that the nymphs tell them about.  While they walk back to Ivet's dwelling and get ready for the party, Ivet explains some of the particulars of her city.  She explains that the desert was once an ocean, and that what are mesas now were once islands where the Fey's magical homeland overlapped with the world.  Many years ago, the oceans dried up, and the Fey homeland collapsed.  Mother Oasis, a powerful lamia-elemental hybrid built the city as a haven for the Fey, connecting it to the global teleport hub and enabling trade with the local desert races.  Over time, her interest in the desert races and trade outweighed her interest in helping the Fey, and Ivet describes them as second-class citizens who have developed an independent social structure not involving money and living primarily on public property because of it.  Ivet's home, for example, is a hollow inside of a tree, with a magical door that opens to her touch.  She explains that her ex-friend Jen, who is a Wizard, helped her make the door, as well as set up several abjurations on her home.  Because most Fey are essentially squatting on public property, Mother Oasis's enforcers, called Cloaks, can arrest nearly anyone with impunity.  Meanwhile, the traders and merchants and other legal businesses and property owners live primarily in the buildings near the center.
 
Viktor drops off his wealth in Ivet's house and they proceed to the party.  Viktor meets Teak, a friend of Ivet's, who tries to play matchmaker between the two.  Viktor also runs into Jen, who suggests that Viktor not become romantically involved with Ivet, because she doesn't share her boyfriends with other people (presumably an uncommon trait among the Fey).
 
Viktor does a decent job of socializing and fitting in, until he is stabbed by a man claiming to be trying to get into the thieves' guild.  Confronting the man, he learns that he was magically compelled to stab him by the unknown apparently half-elf onstage with a huge earth elemental.
 
This man triggers several magical symbols that cause nearly everyone at the party to go insane and attack each other, then reveals himself to be a shapeshifter like Viktor.  He begins eating the partygoers, while Viktor attempts to flee.  He is stopped by the Earth elemental, as the unknown shapeshifter expresses incredulity at viktor's ability to flee rather than attacking him in a hunger-crazed frenzy.  Before he can force the fight, the Cloaks arrive and put a magical barrier between them.  The cloaks teleport Viktor to prison just as he sees the Talpids digging a tunnel for the unknown shapeshifter to escape by.
 
The teleportation separates Viktor from both the elemental and Ivet.
= Characters =
== Viktor ==
The protagonist of the quest.  In his natural form, he is a massive three-eyed creature with greenish-grey skin and horns, totally covered with tentacles.  He stands at about 14 feet tall atop two muscular legs with four clawed toes. His arms are larger, more muscular tentacles, with smaller tentacles draping from them like feathers on a wing, with four more primary grasping tentacles splayed out in a star pattern at the end.  His voice is naturally very deep and guttral, but he has displayed marked eloquence and intelligence at times, when not overcome by hunger.  He is able to reshape his body at will, able to change its shape, composition, color, and density, but not its mass.  A full listing of his current abilities can be found below.
== Ivet ==
Ivet is Viktor's friend and sidekick, and is a mushroom-based creature created from the union of a myconid and a dryad.  She is about 5 feet tall, humanoid, with reddish skin mottled with white dots.  Her body shape is overall that of a thin, athletic human girl, with the exception of her shins, which end in large flat stumps like a mushroom stalk, rather than feet.  Several parts of her body sprout a thin, white covering like the ring of a large mushroom; she usually has this covering over her arms, legs, and head, simulating long sleeve gloves, thigh-high stockings, and hair, respectively.  She can also selectively grow various fungi on her body, and has done so to simulate a skirt, cap, and pigtails.  Ivet is generally fairly excitable, and has a tendency to ramble when she is nervous or excited.  She seems to trust Viktor, and may have feelings for him.  Currently a level 6 Druid.
== Talpids (aka molemen) ==
The talpids bear much resemblance to bipedal star moles with large, white eyes.  They have their own chittering language, which Ivet understands, but Viktor does not.  They are advanced enough to at least forge metal weapons and armor, as well as having spellcasters in their midst.
== Ash Crow ==
A large bird-like creature whose wings continually rain ashes.  It has three eyes and horns, like Viktor, as well as four tentacles protruding from its beak.  It claimed to be either the servant or master of an ancient necromancer.
== Cerin ==
A deer-like Fey.  Whether he's as big a ladies' and dudes' man as he claims to be is unclear.  What is clear is that he's edible.
== Teak ==
An elf or fey friend of Ivet's.  Runs an ale stand, and knows lots of gossip.
== Jen ==
A harpy wizard who was a former friend of Ivet.  Kinda bitchy when drunk.
== ??? (AKA the Singer) ==
Much larger and more powerful than Viktor, with a similar set of abilities.  Also, either a spellcaster or with spellcaster minions.  Affiliated with the Talpids.
 
== Current Abilities ==
Victor can currently:
Victor can currently:


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- Spit acid
- Spit acid
==Basic Plot Summary==
===Thread 1===
An eldritch monstrosity who has been starved and locked away for an unknown (but large) period of time is awakened by some adventurers, and proceeds to eat them while rapidly growing stronger. He then goes in search of further meat and encounters a plant girl named Ivet menaced by highly-edible creatures, and quickly befriends her by means of devouring them and introducing himself as Viktor. She is rapidly charmed by his sophisticated tentacled ways, and they proceed to gather up a bunch of treasure and rest together. Viktor then hunts down a similar eldritch monstrosity who he fights and devours, and then Ivet invites him back to her city.
===Thread 2===
The two travel back to Ivet's home city, a floating island of lush greenery full of fae in the middle of the desert. Viktor shapeshifts into an innocuous form for the journey to avoid attracting attention, then decides to stay in the city for a while with Ivet so that he can smoothly eat all the people she doesn't like and go partying in her company while trying to figure out just what he is and what he should be doing now, aside from eating all the delicious people he can manage and awkwardly failing to romance plant women since he doesn't really understand humanoid thought processes.

Revision as of 05:01, 13 March 2012

Oblitus by ChildOfAB
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A three-eyed, betentacled eldritch man-eating monster and a fungus-based druid learn the meaning of love and also kill a whole lot of stuff. Vaguely D&D-related, but does not follow the rules strictly.

Plot

Chapter 1

The quest begins by introducing Viktor, an emaciated creature who has been locked in a small room with several coins, gems, and a sword for many years, possibly centuries. He has gone without food or entertainment this entire time, and has gone so mad with hunger he no longer remembers who or what he is or why he is there. He is roused from his catatonia by people outside: an elf rogue and a human barbarian, looking for treasure, who unlock his door. Viktor promptly eats them. He realizes that he digests organic materials extremely fast, and when he does so, he restores a bit of his mind (he has a vision of a floating city made of coral) and gains new abilities. He also discovers a vast system of underground caverns inhabited by mole-like humanoids called talpids.

Viktor hears a scream and goes to investigate. He discovers Ivet, a mushroom-like female creature, being attacked by several talpids, with whom she communicates using a language Viktor does not understand. Viktor promptly devours all the Talpids, but spares Ivet because he does not find her fungus-based body appetizing. Ivet is initially shocked by Viktor, but warms up to him when he learns he isn't a mindless killer. She tells him that she came from a society of Fey creatures, which had recently entered hostilities with the talpids after they began following a man espousing gods that allegedly existed before the current pantheon. She says that she was tagging along with her friend Avara, who she described as an important diplomat charged with something to do with ending the hostilities. The talpids, she says, collapsed the tunnels connecting her society with theirs, and killed Avara, leaving her to barely escape with her life. Viktor agrees to help her return to her homeland, but she needs to rest for the journey, because the outside area is a desert and she is out of spells and unprepared to endure it.

Viktor leads her (with a new staff from one of the talpids) back to the room he had been sleeping in, where she is shocked to see the immense wealth he had been sleeping with, and identifies the sword (bearing an image of a horned birdlike creature) as cursed, as it hurts both of them when they touch it. She also identifies the gold coins as belonging to the Ungolan empire, which has not existed for centuries, making the coins worth even more than normal gold.

While Ivet sleeps, Viktor goes off to investigate another living creature he heard deeper in the ruins. He approaches to find a vast hall with a throne in the center bearing a sundered crown, as well as a large bird-like creature called the Ash Crow.

The Ash Crow explains that the ruins once belonged to an ancient being known as the Bone Lord, a necromancer of considerable power, whom the Ash crow served, or who served the Ash Crow (it claims not to recall which). Long ago, according to the Ash Crow, the Bone Lord was struck down by heroes, who "would strike down even the gods with their ignorance." However, the Ash Crow continues, the right "voice" could make them walk again.

The Ash Crow and Viktor then do battle, and Viktor prevails by using his new camouflage ability to deliver a devastating sneak-attack, then finishing it off with a pillar and devouring it. While eating, he has a vision of a bird-like creature bearing gold-plated warriors through the sky, and the bone lord raising one of the birds as a zombie.

Viktor returns to Ivet and sleeps in the room with her. After they both wake and she prepares her spells for the day, they experiment with his new shapeshifting abilities to create a passable human form for him, which can discreetly carry all the coins and gems, as viktor determines that the bird on the sword matches the one in his vision but seems less like the Ash Crow (lacking a third eye and tentacles). They then find their way out of the ruin, which comes out atop a mesa in a vast desert. She identifies her homeland as a giant cloud sitting at ground level in the distance.

Chapter 2

The chapter begins with the readers in control of a deer-like fey named Cerin, who is near the border of the city. The city is identified as being essentially a massive crater in the desert, covered with plant life and enormous trees. A pillar of energy in the center rises out of the crater, passes through the palace of the local sovereign, Mother Oasis, and then branches out and turns into a cloud that covers the entire area, protecting it from the sun.

Cerin sees Viktor and Ivet entering the city and recognizes Ivet, but he can't recall from where. He tries to use mind-altering magic on Viktor to convince him to leave so he can seduce Ivet, but it fails to work. Ivet then uses the same magic to convince Cerin to follow them into a secluded spot in a nearby nymph pond, where Viktor can eat him without attracting attention.

Ivet and Viktor decide to unwind from their harrowing ordeals by going to a local party that the nymphs tell them about. While they walk back to Ivet's dwelling and get ready for the party, Ivet explains some of the particulars of her city. She explains that the desert was once an ocean, and that what are mesas now were once islands where the Fey's magical homeland overlapped with the world. Many years ago, the oceans dried up, and the Fey homeland collapsed. Mother Oasis, a powerful lamia-elemental hybrid built the city as a haven for the Fey, connecting it to the global teleport hub and enabling trade with the local desert races. Over time, her interest in the desert races and trade outweighed her interest in helping the Fey, and Ivet describes them as second-class citizens who have developed an independent social structure not involving money and living primarily on public property because of it. Ivet's home, for example, is a hollow inside of a tree, with a magical door that opens to her touch. She explains that her ex-friend Jen, who is a Wizard, helped her make the door, as well as set up several abjurations on her home. Because most Fey are essentially squatting on public property, Mother Oasis's enforcers, called Cloaks, can arrest nearly anyone with impunity. Meanwhile, the traders and merchants and other legal businesses and property owners live primarily in the buildings near the center.

Viktor drops off his wealth in Ivet's house and they proceed to the party. Viktor meets Teak, a friend of Ivet's, who tries to play matchmaker between the two. Viktor also runs into Jen, who suggests that Viktor not become romantically involved with Ivet, because she doesn't share her boyfriends with other people (presumably an uncommon trait among the Fey).

Viktor does a decent job of socializing and fitting in, until he is stabbed by a man claiming to be trying to get into the thieves' guild. Confronting the man, he learns that he was magically compelled to stab him by the unknown apparently half-elf onstage with a huge earth elemental.

This man triggers several magical symbols that cause nearly everyone at the party to go insane and attack each other, then reveals himself to be a shapeshifter like Viktor. He begins eating the partygoers, while Viktor attempts to flee. He is stopped by the Earth elemental, as the unknown shapeshifter expresses incredulity at viktor's ability to flee rather than attacking him in a hunger-crazed frenzy. Before he can force the fight, the Cloaks arrive and put a magical barrier between them. The cloaks teleport Viktor to prison just as he sees the Talpids digging a tunnel for the unknown shapeshifter to escape by.

The teleportation separates Viktor from both the elemental and Ivet.

Characters

Viktor

The protagonist of the quest. In his natural form, he is a massive three-eyed creature with greenish-grey skin and horns, totally covered with tentacles. He stands at about 14 feet tall atop two muscular legs with four clawed toes. His arms are larger, more muscular tentacles, with smaller tentacles draping from them like feathers on a wing, with four more primary grasping tentacles splayed out in a star pattern at the end. His voice is naturally very deep and guttral, but he has displayed marked eloquence and intelligence at times, when not overcome by hunger. He is able to reshape his body at will, able to change its shape, composition, color, and density, but not its mass. A full listing of his current abilities can be found below.

Ivet

Ivet is Viktor's friend and sidekick, and is a mushroom-based creature created from the union of a myconid and a dryad. She is about 5 feet tall, humanoid, with reddish skin mottled with white dots. Her body shape is overall that of a thin, athletic human girl, with the exception of her shins, which end in large flat stumps like a mushroom stalk, rather than feet. Several parts of her body sprout a thin, white covering like the ring of a large mushroom; she usually has this covering over her arms, legs, and head, simulating long sleeve gloves, thigh-high stockings, and hair, respectively. She can also selectively grow various fungi on her body, and has done so to simulate a skirt, cap, and pigtails. Ivet is generally fairly excitable, and has a tendency to ramble when she is nervous or excited. She seems to trust Viktor, and may have feelings for him. Currently a level 6 Druid.

Talpids (aka molemen)

The talpids bear much resemblance to bipedal star moles with large, white eyes. They have their own chittering language, which Ivet understands, but Viktor does not. They are advanced enough to at least forge metal weapons and armor, as well as having spellcasters in their midst.

Ash Crow

A large bird-like creature whose wings continually rain ashes. It has three eyes and horns, like Viktor, as well as four tentacles protruding from its beak. It claimed to be either the servant or master of an ancient necromancer.

Cerin

A deer-like Fey. Whether he's as big a ladies' and dudes' man as he claims to be is unclear. What is clear is that he's edible.

Teak

An elf or fey friend of Ivet's. Runs an ale stand, and knows lots of gossip.

Jen

A harpy wizard who was a former friend of Ivet. Kinda bitchy when drunk.

??? (AKA the Singer)

Much larger and more powerful than Viktor, with a similar set of abilities. Also, either a spellcaster or with spellcaster minions. Affiliated with the Talpids.

Current Abilities

Victor can currently:

- Consume creatures (Victor can upgrade or gain abilities as he eats things. The amount a meal improves him seems to be based off of intelligence or magical potential rather than body mass)

- Walk/climb on walls and ceilings

- Shapeshift (amorphous)

-- Stretch with considerable strength and elasticity

-- Fit through small spaces

-- Camouflage as terrain (by changing color/shape)

-- Mimic the appearance other creatures

- Spit acid